Joanne, you really have the voice but really need some coaching.
You are too rough on your singing and must work hard on the breathing too. You do not shift smoothly.
You could have been top 5 if you had me as your coach.
I'm so sorry that we did not know each other.
You need to show sweetness and tenderness in your singing and confidence at once. Please go back next year and we will carry it to the top.
Robert M. St Fleur
Author and Musician (international)